Philosophical Suggestions:
- Take the student seriously--assume that the paper is a significant effort and not a first draft.
- Respond to the ideas expressed--agree, argue, point out contradictions, ask questions, and discuss the text that is the subject of the paper.
- Go beyond impressionistic response to analysis--is the idea developed logically? Is there an argumentative edge? Is the text used accurately?
- Eschew the overly general ("Your argument is not convincing." "Your writing needs improving." "Your organization was weak.") Show where and how.
- Suggest strategies or procedures that will help the student next time. ("After your first draft, write out your thesis statement and then check to see if every paragraph relates to it." "Be sure in the future to back up your claims with textual evidence." "After finishing each chapter, write a précis while your memory is fresh so that you organize the material more quickly when it comes time to write your paper.")
- When making your final comment, remember that few if any students ever complain about too much response to their ideas (they may think they receive too much negative criticism).
- Mix praise with advice in your final comment.